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My Dream Lover

why do we dream abot the ones we lose?
yes there still here but no longer yours.

i see him nightly without fail,
my mnds eye conjuring up what i can not bear to see

his long lashes agains yur skin,
his deep soulful eyes gaze at you seeing all.

long arms around your waist,
dancing in the moonlight.

peace, content, love, joy.
all thiings you see and feel in his presence.

not knowing how to say the things you feel,
he whispers "i love you" and holds you tighter.

leaning in for a kiss,
you hear a faint bt annying "bep, beep, beep"

like an alarm clock.
WAKE UP TURN IT OFF!

trying to hold on to the bits and peices of your dream,
knowing it will never happen in reality.

so until tonight my love
my life

i wrote this awhile back and just found it one of my fav. writes

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 26
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    A very lovely , touching & romantic
    write ! Thank you for sharing ,
    to read - a delight ! Take care ,
    Best wishes & hugs , friend Easy


  • kitty23
    July 21
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    great alot of spelling errors but that's fixable.
    it really flows together.

    Love ALWAYS
    Me