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Drifter

A symphony of images play
Echoing my life gone by,
Standing by the roadside,
Backpack breaking my shoulder,
Holding my loved photo,
A family lost to time.

A violent shock clears my mind,
I drift ashore, my flotsam scattered by,
The beach shone with silver sand,
My mind tricks my head again,
I grasped myself, bowing in pain,
A broken bone found inside my hull.

Cars pass by my shaking image,
Ignoring this lost soul, adrift from all,
Night came; the cold touched me again,
Alone except my twisted voices,
My boat capsized, my home deserted,
My mind has lost its bearings.

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About me not being able to piece my life together

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  • Denerica
    June 3

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    You will because you know the cause for drifting, you will float and rise above it...use the mess to become blessed...you can overcome, your words share such a thing...because you are aware. Brilliant write.Blessings.

  • Wow. very sad and i hope you were able to get through it!
    Celtic


  • karissa
    June 3
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    lol