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life is life, death is death

life is life
i wanna end it
my life isnt anything but hell

life isn't anything but trouble to me
i slit my wrist and watch it bleed

cause my life is just life

death is death

death is my specialty
is something i look forward too
give me the knife ill end it soon

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  • a-girl-from-ashes
    June 3
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    cute


  • poetic assasin
    June 3

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    wow morid but beautifly put theres alot into this i just hope you find writing it down takes some of it away


  • andywontdie silver member
    June 3

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    pretty straight forward and fairly morbid. I think we all feel that way at times in our life, where things just get piled up and it's just one thing after another and the shit just never seems to end. But in those moments where it seems that all is lost, that is the moment you need to stick it out, cause then the tides will turn. Thanks for sharing, I hope you can make your life more then 'just' life, something worthwhile.