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my world

My world is cushed cause of you
my world i'm alone
my world is just gray

i wonder if light will ever shine in my world to clear all the darkness
but i dont think it will

the darkness will always be there

my world is crush cause you didnt really know
my world i stay alone
my world is always gray

this poem is about someone but not giving names out

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  • At least there is decipherable color in your world. There have been times in my life where it was just plain black, all colors and light were devoured by the darkness in me. So that means that there is light somewhere dancing behing the murky grey mist, keep searching and you'll find it . Boing.