Be my Father
that I may be a beloved son
Be my Confidence
that I may know Love
Be my first and highest Love
that I may have share in Your wisdom
Oh, God
For I am weak and innocent
fragile, poor in spirit
Look into the depths of my eyes
this child yearning
Speechless am I
for I’m nothing without You
Oh, God
My heart is open,
Father
Author notes
M a r y O
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A contest entry
- Round 2! (invite only) by pinksnowboots.
950 points, ended September 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I thought that it was a beautiful prayer, but it wasn't what I asked you to do. I wanted you to take the two pictures I gave you and write me those people's love story. If you would like to change it to make it correct for the contest instructions, you may, or you may leave it like this, but I can't pass you on to the next round.
It is still a very pretty prayer, just not what I asked for. I would suggest keeping this poem on AP. -
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Thank you for your comment
I thought I was to choose one of the two and then write. Sorry.
I've been out of town a lot lately and am still on the move. I don't think I have the time to complete my part of this contest; so sorry again. Thank you for considering me and graciously offering me another chance, but, under my circumstances I think best to count me out. I'm sure I'll catch you on another contest when I'm able to be more stationary at home.
Thanks again,
~Mary O
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Girl: http://iles.deviantart.com/art/corrupted-10648641
Guy: http://endoo.deviantart.com/art/innocent-84147860
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