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[ Words to Mine ]

WORDS TO MINE

My sunshine
All so fine
Slender like a pine
Demeanor so divine
And eyes that shine

I’ll take you out to dine
And we’ll pop the best wine
Looking into those eyes of thine
I’ll ask you to be mine
Cos loving you ain’t a crime

Hear the clock chime
Saying there’s no time
Your love I’ll not decline
Cos we are heading to our prime
And I’ll love you for all time



Do I need to go to a shrine?
Do I need a sorcerer to divine?
Do I need a formula to define?
This thing I feel all the time
I pray this feeling does not sublime
Cos it’s our time to shine

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