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~ Seeing Beyond ~

Seeing beyond what the human eye can see
Another world awaits
So close and yet so far away
You can only enter by way of the gates

First you must pass the original test
A feat not easily conquered
Many will fail and be gone forever
Others will be the conquerers

Beauty surrounds and sweetness fills the air
The sun it shines all day
Musicical voices in chorous sound
All there gather as one and praise

No tears are shed and pain is gone
Replaced by peace and joy
All there are greeted and recognised
One is perfect in all His glory


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JB

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  • Amana Araya Jabari
    June 3

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    Many will fail and be gone forever
    Others will be the conquerers
    Personaly I would add 'but others...'

    I relly love it. its almost taunting me of a world I cant see...


  • pinksnowboots
    June 3
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    This is a great spiritual poem!


    Seeing beyond what the human eye can see
    Another world awaits
    So close and yet so far away
    You can only enter by way of the gates


    Beauty surrounds and sweetness fills the air
    The sun it shines all day
    Musicical voices in chorous sound
    All there gather as one and pray