CRUNCH!!
two snails--
one homeless
Andrew Hide
16~03~2004
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First published in Simply Haiku September 2004
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Written March 16th, 2004
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hahah...this was funny...poor little snail.. -
Ewwww. What an awful image. shudders Now I have the chills. I can't stand the thought of one all crunched and gross. ewwww
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OUCH! UGH! eeee...hate this image in my head. Get it out, get it out! Lol. Wouldn't that crunch also squish, Andrew??
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BIG GRIN... read it after I posted another snail
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Fun, except for the Snail
Hi Andrew:
I know I shouldn't, but I had to laugh with this humorous write. You tickled my funny bone on this one and I appreciate it. Thanks and that was a fun write. Bill -
Andrew.You should be more careful and watch where you walk or there will be ne Escargot.I don't like Escargot but enjoyed the poem
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Yuck....I mean Ooooo that is just gross... But the funniest Haiku I have read in forever!!!!!! Bravo!!! Susan
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What else can I say except
? Very short, very funny!
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Extinction or evolution? Now one snail and one slug.
Very funny.
John -
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HAHAHA!!! I don't really think this would fall under the Haiku catigory, since it lacks the 5-7-5 structure.. but damn is is cute!!! ^.^
~Cheryl
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