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You Light Up My Life



and then the storm moves on
no longer darkening my skies
feels like a mid-day dawn 
your glow upon my meager cries

while i am leafless and naked to all
it is with you, my guiding light
i shake off bleakness and stand tall
your sweet warm rays make me right



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  • ennovy silver member
    June 3

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    Short and well said verses..You spoke so warmly about nature...Thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos