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haiku ~ quiet




the dog barks
chastising
a cricket



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  • Kevin Moderators member
    June 24

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    pehraps title it "quiet!" I had a neighborhood dog barking from 1-3am last night, fun!

    the dog barks
    at the cricket
    the cricket barks back