Suspense
stolen looks
and hidden secrets
waiting for a chance
for a moment.
What to do
what to say,
what if
what then.
Over thought
over reaction.
But stop,
wait.
Hesitant steps
softly behind me.
I freeze in place,
gentle hands on my waist.
Slowly I'm turned
silence broken by
two thrashing heartbeats.
A nervous peck,
never so comfortable.
And as with every good,
great
first kiss
I'm left wanting more.
A contest entry
- Kiss and Tell.. by ButILoveHer.
650 points, ended June 13, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Woo!
This is a great one. I'm thinking my second favourite in this contest. Though- its a close call. Between http://allpoetry.com/poem/5393351 and this one. Beautiful job!
"Slowly I'm turned
silence broken by
two thrashing heartbeats."
It's intense, in love, in nervousness! -
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Thankyou... It helps that the kiss was intense, loving and nervous.
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wow this was brilliant.. i found myself reading it again and agian and letting my thoughts run wild... thanks for entering
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Thankyou so much for yor kind words.
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