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Swirling Slipstream



Often the white clouds show in relief
That drifting along is done in our sleep
I havent missed the curving clefts
Either indoors, or dozing in rest

Perhaps if I stare its because of my hope
To slip down the soft silky slope
Over the hills, to see the other light
How it fits that curve, shining just right

Oh give me the pulse in your puckering drift
Let me find deep please exploring the rift
But in the evening let us stretch out slow
Having waning light off to dreams pull us so

Morning find us in slow serious swirl
Building us thick and deep
Precious Dew to Heat
We often, forever, will just repeat

The day may draw us down
or  push us apart
but I know this  moment
Our swirling slipstream

Remains in my heart

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  • Denerica
    June 3

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    Interesting word...slipsstream, so inspiring, full of peace, acceptance, and the hope of the wait will be worth it. Excellent. Blessings.


  • myrataal silver member
    June 3

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    A softly romantic piece of peace ...

    longing and yearning, written from a loving heart.

    It is good to see you write again, Devon. And as always, the honesty of the deep desire to be united in love, is shown.

    May your happiness be complete.

    Love
    Myra


    • DevonJM
      June 3

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      I dont want my happiness, alone

      So yes, complete Is what I am longing and yearning for, as I am sure you know from reading my work. I hope to be writing more often, and I cherish your words forever.

      Love you,
      Devon