Do you feel me lay down next to you,
though I'm hundreds of miles away?
Watching you look right through me;
wishing you could hear the words I say.
But I'm going to keep on whispering to you
looking deep into your eyes.
Hoping that you drift off to sleep,
before morning lights the skies.
Neither of us sleeps much lately, I know,
because of the truths I have revealed.
This one of a kind Love has never slowed;
I don't regret letting you know how I feel.
I'm trying so hard to stay close to you,
With my soul, my heart, and in my mind.
To remind you that I love you,
beyond the boundaries of time.
Do you feel me laying next to you?
Like something softly touches your skin?
I'll always kiss you sweetly on your head,
until I return again.
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greatness
This is so relatable to me. I have been in a long distance relationship and this sums it up. Wow, I really realllly enjoyed this poem! Great rhyme scheme and passion. Lovely write
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wonderFul
I loved this! Enjoyed reading it so much!! "Do you feel me laying next to you?Like something softly touches your skin?I'll always kiss you sweetly on your head,until I return again." Wonderful words to me!! All of it!! Great job! :-) looking forward to reading More from you!
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Very Beautiful
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nice
Paints a very vivid picture. I like this one a lot.
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Very sweet and cuddly. I'm glad you're feeling good about this. That generally means that it's the right thing.
Talk to you soon! ♥
~Sharon
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Ah! I am so happy that you put this to such beautiful words my friend ... At the same time sad because I am sitting here feeling like I can completely relate to what your saying in your writing. Love can be a tricky tricky thing, but like I have said before, its very important to tell the one you love that you love them no matter what the concequences. You never know whats gonna happen. I'm proud you spoke your feelings and I'm happy you spoke your after feelings here on AP with this. You've done a beautiful job... sweetly honest. I like it
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This is beautiful and something i can really relate to, wonderful rhythm and rhyme buddy.
All the best.
Ken
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I was feelin pretty lonely there for an hour or so, then this made me feel a lot better, especially the end "until I return again" theres comfort here that really hit the spot.
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