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if i told you that i loved you...

if i told you that i loved you,
would you turn and walk away?
if i said how much you mean to me,
would you hesitate to stay?

if i told you that i cut myself,
would you even shed a tear?
if i were in the hospital,
would you even feel the fear?

if i said i was gunna die,
would you stay through the night?
if i were in danger,
would you keep me in your sight?

im telling you that i love you,
i just want you to see.
so please dont walk away right now,
you mean a-lot to me.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 4

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a really good poem - I like the open and honest emotion of this piece, the pleading and the love well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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  • xox Blue Moon xox
    June 3
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    Good write I hope the other person actualy sees that they do mean alot to you