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The broken thoughts inside

The broken thoughts inside my head,
have taunted me to long,
I need to let them out again,
before my mind is gone.

My life has changed drematicly,
since last i let it spill,
I'm not the begger or the drunk,
or hooked on every pill.

I'm living in a perfect house,
with everything i want,
I have someone to hold me, 
and love the way i flaunt.

But still theres something missing,
I'm not sure what it is.
I don't know what i need,
to make the perfect kiss.



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I'm just getting out of a writers block spell so this is just the start

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  • love the rhyming it flows effortlesly, and the subject is brilliant, really love it and relate totally,