Three years is a long time,
You lied, you fucked up, I changed my mind.
So you remember me crying on the ground,
Big deal, I'm over it, yeah don't you regret that now.
All the notes and pictures, just throw them out.
That's what I did, with everything you gave me.
Throw everything out, don't keep a fucking thing.
You'll never make me believe, that your the one for me.
Nothing you do or say will ever change a thing.
You can miss me all you want, I don't miss you at all.
I'll never go back to the way things were before.
and your right he will never love me as much as you did ,
no, cause he loves me so much more.
All the notes and pictures, just throw them out.
That's what I did, with everything you gave.
Throw everything out, don't keep a fucking thing.
You'll never make me believe, that your the one for me.
Nothing you do or say will ever change a thing.
I'll never fucking trust you again,
I already forgave you, that doesn't mean I will let you back in.
So leave me alone, can't you take a hint
All the notes and pictures, just throw them out.
That's what I did, with everything you gave.
Throw everything out, don't keep a fucking thing.
You'll never make me believe, that your the one for me.
Nothing you do or say will ever change a thing.
Author notes
This is inspired by "Pictures of you" by: ahki97 aka josh
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5396064
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haha this is really mean and just fucked up.. I was just pissed at him atm but yeah... came out wrong lol
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That's what I did, with everything you gave me.
suggestion, take out 'me' and leave it,
"That's what I did, with everything you gave."..like you did the second time in this.
I can feel the pain, the anger in this. I can relate so well to this.
thanks for entering.
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what a Fab write!! you go girly!!! xx
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wow you were inspired by me crazy
lol im happy you like the way i write and it inspires you =) thats a good thing right? by the way i updated my profile check it out .. -
Can really feel the anger and hatred flowing through it.
I feel this would make a great song, the repeating paragraph works in really well.
Thanks for entering good luck
kmp
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this is awesome! i think 90% of the world could relate to this poem it was so well written with lots of emotion, nice one x
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Hood-Wink!
This reminded me of Eamons song from a few years ago; this has power and deep raw emotions that are expressed very well
Breakups are hard but I think if you can come through it you can survive just about anything
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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loved it bunches doll
iv missed you dearly how are things
i see your talent for writeing is still amazing!!1
love mucho
your sis,
vanna
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Dang skippy that is great! "and your right he will never love me as much as you did ,
no, cause he loves me so much more." Awlays will forever and i mean it babe
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another excellent write by you! a job very well done! always a fan of your work! you know i'll always be here for more..lol.
i like the fact that you repeated the section about throwing it all away so you can make your point known to the jerk because after all, we know that sometimes you have to practically drill it into someone that you're happy with the one you're with and that you don't want the jerk back...why would you go back to some a@@hole when you have a great guy now that loves you better and more.
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Burn!
Nicely written, hun. Love it
Maria
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