He is dark and brooding,
She is light and joy.
He walks with the grace of a lion, in long strong strides,
She dances along side with the grace of a gazelle.
He is raw power under tight control,
She is open and giving.
His thoughts are hidden,
She is wears her heart wide open.
He is respected, admired,
She is protected and safe
In one look she knows his needs,
In her smile he knows her needs.
He knows his worth,
She knows her worth.
They move together in a rhythm as old as time.
They fit together. There are no secrets.
There will never be enough time, oh that it could stand still.
He has given her his all.
She has given him her heart.
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Welcome to allpoetry
The relationship between a man and a woman, where their is true love between them is a beautiful dance to behold. My only suggestions are to not do double spaced. Also to even out the lines. That would improve the flow a lot. Otherwise well done. Good imagery.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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great piece thanks a million for sharing
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