It's already over,
but before I confess,
you cut yourself open.
You are exposed,
and... I love it.
I can see your insides,
the expansion of your rib cage,
and the beating of your heart.
The beating of my heart.
But I cry by myself
with only a blue blanket
to wipe away my tears.
Author notes
Option Three.
Love - Currently.
Title by Mattia.
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I named this poem!
I think it's a bloody brilliant title also.
The poem is bloody brilliant too :]
This comment sucks.
But you don't.
And I don't.
And Ame doesn't,
(Or maybe she does)
:]
Hehe.
Good write Li
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(I think she does.)
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(I know she does.)
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(Maybe she won't come back to this...)
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( I love you too Baby!)
((Yeah Li, she definitely does suck
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(Dude, she tells me everything.)
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( I know. That's why I'm rubbing it in)
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this is soo different i really thought the wa you went about writing this was creative and original. You have a very interesting point of view that i love reading...keep it up...much <3...scars.
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