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A Moonful of Men~ (Legend of Night & Day)

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She is the daughter,
the daughter of December.
She's had an ice cold heart
as far as I could remember.

She has a moonful of men
she has cast to the side.
She's most ecstatic when
Tranquility's Sea is at high tide.

As she wields her sword,
tomorrow's split in two.
One half goes to Helios,
the other half goes to the moon.

Men travel their entire lives to reach the twelfth month,
for someone to cling to and savor.
Pulled in by the prettiest smile in the heavens,
only to be impaled by her saber.

She is the daughter,
the daughter of December.
She's had an ice cold heart
as far as I could remember.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Bluemonday silver member
    September 1

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    Legend, and I do see you as that, is something missing or am Ireading it all wrong...You are one of the great crafters here...But please tell this ignoramus what I'm missing...Dan...ps I love the poem...but there's more?

  • A really mystical and mythic type of poem that was a real pleasure to read. Keep up the wonderful works.

  • wow, this is superb. brilliant and creatively clever write.


  • Azgar
    June 3
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    nice!

  • this is a cool fairytale. Great rhyme, structure and rhythm.
    Celtic

  • A-Muse-ing hun. Ha ha ha

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