If you've ever been in love,
a love that seemed unreal...
That ended without notice,
I know just how you feel.
You do not know what went wrong,
maybe it was an act on her behalf all along?
You didnt plan to love her,
you never wanted to.
But the feelings just get stronger,
no matter what you do.
Your plans and dreams together,
become your memories...
Just remember, it's not your fault when she leaves.
When She Leaves, what does this mean?
Is there something I did wrong, what could it be?
When she leaves, does it mean theres some one else?
And if there is, how do I live without her there to help?
When she leaves.
not finished
Comments
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Wow
This is....
Amaizing,
For lack of a better,
Well discription,
I love the feeling,
and emotion that,
You put into this,
I, as many i think,
can relate to this,
well done. -
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Thank you very much. I actually intended on adding more to this poem. But I decided not to. Im trying my best to get over this girl. I was with her for 5 years and then one day she left me for this other guy. 2 Weeks later he moved into the apartment I had been living in with her. Now they are getting married and having children together, after only knowing each other 5 months. But all is well, I thought I'd never even date again. But I just started dating some one new yesterday, and so far she is great. Thanks for reading and commenting. You should check out some of my other works. If you have time, read Love Is War. Ttyl.
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