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[contest] innocent drug

You made me so happy
With every smile you shot.
You are perfection;
The one drug I've got.
Don't deprive me;
Don't you see?


A contest entry

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  • HereComesTheSun
    June 3

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    JUDGED

    with a prompt with a few words you never want to end with a question it makes it hard to connect to the piece and it makes you want more; but your first few lines of the stanza was very well done it really took the prompt to a new level. thank for entering