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Happy Orange Cat

There is no creature quite as happy
As the smiling, purring tabby
Who sits upon the ginger mat
And acts like he is king of cats
While soaking up the amber rays
Of the summer sun by day
Then, by night, he does retire
By the glowing orange fire.
Whenever life seems gray or dull
This tabby makes it colorful.

Author notes

Orange+Happy= this poem
I love kitties! Yay!

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  • GotLilt
    June 2
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    Thanks for entering this adorable poem.


  • jyzzie
    June 2
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    This is soooo F ing cute lol


  • Saturnine
    June 2
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    Awww! This was cute ^^


  • ScarsFade
    June 2

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    what a cute little tabby you discribed. It had a cute fun playful rhythm to it and i throughly enjoyed every line....real cute...much <3 scars.


    • Obani
      June 2
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      wow, that was amazing, you just read and commented on my poem within 2 seconds of me posting it
      thanks for the sweet reveiw, i was a little unsure of this one, but now i feel pretty good about it. thanks!

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