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i've never helped myself so much



true altruism seeking a disciple
a canned source of heat to feed


the oxygenless decay errs on not damaging enough
caving in from underneath a coffin, sinking up


the glow of full goblets containing liquid justice
culls the craze from the solitude


there is the sensible notion something is wrong
being right may just be insanity

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  • myrataal silver member
    July 15

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    Yes this is what the world wants us to believe ...

    but you are not insane. You are as normal as the next guy.

    YAY!

    You still write a deft poem.
    Love
    Myra