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Impure love

A case of writers block has simply taken over
And my feelings are much to torn to manifest
Longings and beckonings are so overbearing
So i sit in myself and confine the disease

Memories kill the soul from being set free
Wandering this broken path for what seems eternity
Time is nothing and leads to nowhere
I can't handle this mental repetitive despair

Perfection is nothing but blood on my walls
But nothing is real so its just hallucinations
Shadows and ghosts are all they become
But they are all living, what the fuck is going on?

Memories kill the soul from being set free
Wandering this broken path for what seems eternity
Time is nothing and leads to nowhere
I can't handle this mental repetitive despair

I'm living and breathing but it's all a great lie
Always something to compare, always a supremacy
No matter the vows there's no one who's clean
Nothing is pure and now i've joined this pointless insanity

Memories kill the soul from being set free
Wandering this broken path for what seems eternity
Time is nothing and leads to nowhere
I can't handle this mental repetitive despair

Author notes

here you go sweety
i've had writers block oddly enough for my horrid emotions lately, i hope this is somewhat good enough though

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  • No matter the vows there's no one who's clean
    Nothing is pure and now i've joined this pointless insanity

    Total perfection in peotic verse!

    I like it, I like it so!

  • this was a great one, you sure know how to make any and every emotion break throughin your writings. i like how you reveal the anger of the subject through your detailed descriptions. keep it up miss mandi, youll make a great lyricist if thats your goal.