people
abandoning me
waiting
but for what?
they don't want it to happen
don't even know it will
but till then
they distance themselves
from me
I'm alone
now
Author notes
this used to mean something. it dosent anymore.
what do you think? tell me how to make it better!
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well im sry i cant live up to ur all mighty standards. it was another impulse poem. as for yours. really bland. sry but its not ur best work. it is emotional but doesnt speak.
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Nice poem
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i liked the emotion in it tho! and poetry shood always mean something to the author!
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thanks!
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