There is a place that's a simple thought
and under imagined time
a location
that you always see
but never venture
to think of
It's graceful
and simple
in stature
easy to dream
every color that enters
leaves quietly as it came
from the bashful turquoise of the waters
and the silent vapors of air
everything is sterile
everything is simple
no need to
think
or over-analyze
because every wish
has already happened
every thought
has already been voiced
you are living simple
you are living through
touch
and feeling
through sense
and vibration
all that's required
is to close your eyes
feel the simplicity of the world that
you wish to embody
and this place
is none other than
your home
A contest entry
- Imagine a world by Bullets.
1000 points, ended June 9, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love it! I am a lover of the simple things. This is a perfect description.
Good luck
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thanks soo very much glad you enjoy it!
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great
i love the visual imagery you used with this one, i can really picture the setting in my mind. you really have a way with words, nice job
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This is stunning. So calm and relaxing, and the tranquility is catching: I found myself sighing by the end of it. You describe the simplicity so eloquently that you created a beautiful picture for the reader to see. There is nothing in this world that seems out of place. A lovely poem, I really liked this.
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thank you thats the feel i was trying to give to it and i am glad that translated...much <3 scars
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Oh my god..this is inspiring! It is definetly a piece to make scars...fade ;-)
Love it!
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thanks sooo much i reallly love that you enjoyed it. I write for myself but when other people like it i am inspired to write more.
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