we held hands under the
crimson sky and kissed
under the crystal water
and walked away through
shame
we picked up the stars
and formed them to hearts
and placed them near our feet
to watch them slowly drain
through the beautiful dirt
are body's filled with dust
as we quietly fell through love
we turned to butterfly's
and made color around the world
our wings were made of glass
and they smashed so beautifully
all i ever wanted was to see
giant hooks pull from your back
and watch as they slowly sink
into your tender skin
as i hug your blood
Screaming like starving children
as there bodies drift away
in the wind and i kiss there
ashes so softly as it poisons
my lips and the more i turn white
the more i love this world
I carved my heart into your mind
and you cried out my name
through tunnels of death
i ran through those tunnels
to hear the sweet call and only found
a doll that layed so sweetly upon the
black stained ground.Her face was crying
but she smiled so nicely
You made me realized my life
wasn't made for this world
so i took a train to your world
and stopped at a cliff and
watched the sunset then jumped
and i cried but smiled
because this was what i was meant
to have and this is how it was suppose
to go
till the end.
Author notes
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Written March 16th, 2004
A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 17, 2004, 40 entries
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holy jesus shaped chicken pieces, this is amazing!!! christ, woman how do you do it!? grrr!!! there's some absoluely mindblowing images here as usual.. liiike "Screaming like starving children" aaaaaannnnd "our wings were made of glass
and they smashed so beautifully" aaaaannnnnd "as i hug your blood". you must be some kind of demigod or something cos you're stuff's too good... you put us all to shame... ah dear. keep this up and i'll have no choice but to go cry somewhere. hehe you should enter more contests... and you should win this one!!!
hehe see ya soon xxxxxx

