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Mafia Wars...

Looting and robbing,
Building my mob,
Waiting for energy,
Attempting to rob,
Levels are growing,
Loot being dropped,
Having some fun,
Trying not to get popped,
Collecting members,
Settling scores,
Lord help,
Im addicted....
To Mafia Wars!!!

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  • Capt Jed silver member
    July 16

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    Very good Sheila, well written and also funny. That is the very reason that I have NOT JOINED the Mafia Wars. It think I too would become addicted.


  • koshkka
    July 11

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    haha, that is hilarious. my mother is addicted too. i have sworn to avoid it at all costs. good poem!

  • lol

    watch out what you say now...


  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 10

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    excellent!

    I love the energy you have written into this poem. I take it that this is a game, and not the real Mafia. I play rpg games on Playstation II, and I remember seeing this title in one of the magazines.

    Love the rhyme scheme too.

    Jeannette


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 10

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    I sit next to a colleague who tells me all about his Mafia Wars habit!
    I better introduce you

    Fun stuff too

    Jeff


  • Mr-D
    June 10
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    haha made me grin, too true.

  • I clicked onto this cause when I saw the title it made me laugh. Why? Because I've spent the past few days glued to the computer screen playing Mafia Wars. Hope you're not one of the people I've whacked lately. LOL!

  • I love it!!!

    Me too. Well done and well said.

  • this was a fun sounding write...It shows that you can take something serious and have a little fun with it. great job! I enjoyed this very much. peace and light, KP

  • Oh yeah! This flowed effortlessly. Lyrical and timely, spun into fun. I loved it! I want more! LOL I had to read this twice it was so nice. You go now!


    Much Love ♥

    Renee

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