un seul jour de soleil
déjà cassent les gosses nus
l’étang plat
un seul jour sans soleil
déjà laissent tomber les pavots
leurs couleurs
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A contest entry
- Crack Me Up-Ku by azure85.
900 points, ended June 15, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Quelles belles paires, j'aiment le second beaucoup. Les couleurs s'effaçant des pavots, une description élégante. Merci tellement.
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De rien.
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I flunked french
the only thing I passed in that class
was the girl sitting next to me
we practiced the art of her kiss
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Come here to the sunshine state... We have all the sun you want! Love haiku in French.
Love,
Amera
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No thanks - they mug Brits there!
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Translation, please?
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on its way by IM
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Thank you. I particularly enjoyed the first!
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En seulement jour la France a été envahie et défaite. Poésie gentille.
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Yeah right. Merci pour les lapins.
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Laissez le jeu d'enfants dans l'étang.
Le soleil de juin peut le cricket et le tennis soit-il lointain ?
Bonheur
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Well done. Une journée sans nos enfants est une journée sans soleil. -c
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O.o
well, whatever it is, I'm sure it deserves three clappies at least
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Gratefully accepted.
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okies..smart bunny...IM please
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You got it.
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A slight exaggeration
but well worth the bunnies
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I thought you might like to see this in Google translation. I've divided it up into suitable lines to make it more poetic. I think it has a surrealist quality which you might appreciate.
one day of sun
already broke
kids naked
pond dish
a day without sun
already drop poppies color
(or should I say colour)
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Près, mais pas de cigare!
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Défense de fumer. Especialement en L'Écosse.
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A translation? As I don't know a word of French, yes please!
Bill -
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IM coming up.
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