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June Snow (Haiku)

Dandelion seeds
collect in the bird bath -
June snow

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A few days ago there were so many dandelion seeds floating about it looked like snow. They all collected in huge piles in front of the grocery store, it was very bizarre.

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  • Draig aine gold member
    June 23
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    a most excellent ku

  • Bruce silver member
    June 20
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    this is very, very good! Distinct images.


  • whitecoffee
    June 13
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    wonderful! Much luck in the contest. I like this one alot...great images I get from it


  • penchanted
    June 4

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    wonderful imagery, beautifully done.. I would have never thought of dandelion snow.. beautiful
    best of luck in the contest

    Jo

  • Wow this is beautiful.
    I really love it!

  • Great!

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