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The ending angel

hello new friend
i cant be saved
I dnt know you but I do love you
so sweet you are in every grace
but now i need to show you
my name is storme cady
my pleasure is my pain
my death with be and end to evil
and all that is insane
I hope you have a great great life
and keep my thought nearby
for i am with you in this world
no matter how i die
I cry while I write this
for I know what i must do
life is ending for me
but its not the end for you
have fun
I love ya hun
goodbye

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  • Wow xeroabyss my best friend commented on this
    Great poem and I can relate.Sometimes I believe death is way better than leaving and dealing with everyday life.Love can be a funeral sometimes...

  • I hope it feels better to be dead than it does to be alone...or mayhaps it doesn't feel at all.
    love sucks

  • Aw, the ending ish saaad T__T