Soul fly on wings lifting my soul
Heart beats her life into my heart
Coal fire glows in eyes black as coal
Depart my fantasy depart
Bound to my soul never be bound
Touch me; I'll be lost in your touch
Drowned in your beauty I'll be drowned
Clutch my body; my soul you'll clutch
Face your eyes away from my face
I will be captured by your eye
Embrace me I'll melt in embrace
Why torment my heart and soul. Why?
Hole in my heart leaves me not whole
Soul fly away leaving my soul
Author notes
Written in the Shadow Sonnet Form invented by the incredibly beautiful and talented Amera M. Andersen.
In a list
A contest entry
- For My Wonderful Family Only by Paloszoo.
1750 points, ended June 23, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I’ve never been brave enough to try this form, which you master so well. Great job on this lovely piece! Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored to read your work.
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BRAVO, BRAVO! What a poem! It's very well-written and delivers a powerful message using very well chosen words.
Well done and hope to see more of your fantastic work!
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