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Until Death

No colors on the rainbow but b l a c k &and w h i t e
Everyone dislikes eachother, hatred fills the battered streets.
Nothing can get in- nothing can get out.
D.e.a.t.h is at an all time high.

With the suicides and murders;
No one is willing to give them food.
All they have to do is drop it off through the cracks,
Under the sky high f e n c e s.

No food leads to canniblism,
Canniblism leads to war.
The used to be small town;
Spilts up into different worlds.

Once in a while they'll see eachother,
Old friends- on the side they want death of
e a c h o t h e r

Pain; Is the new love.

Nothing no longer matters;
Because nothing is no longer living.

Welcome to my world.

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Deny It, But I Am Alone Now

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  • Bullets
    June 9

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    At times I feel as if this is my world too. The dirty pretty goes good with this.
    Good luck
    -Bullets

  • this is really good...and i agree it is true to life.

  • this is really good I love it it is really true to life