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Stinking Rules

Take them, shake them
Dust them off
Dip them, soak them
Add detergent,
Gauge the water,
Temperature,
Throw into the Chaos Machine,
In every household,
Watch them spin,
Wring them out,
Take them,
Shake them,
Hang them in the Sun,
Put them on
Till they stink again.

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  • Macsword
    June 2
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    hahahahaah!!!!

    No, you don't have to revise this. It's perfect for no rules.

    • Gupse
      June 24
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      Thank you.
      I thought of how people re-cycled their laws and systems, going through all sorts of violent and non-violent revolutions, only to end up having ANOTHER system to sort out.
      Like laundry, like household chores: neverending, always necessary.