Broken down to shivers
One right after the next
Sensual little touches
Slapping me back
Bind me to this moment
Hold me to the bed
You whisper to me softly
Welcoming me in
Dead eyes forever burning
Lifeless desire in your mind
I struggle for freedom
But give in to your wine
You can't win against poison
It burns its way down
Taking you forever onward
Until you bed the ground
Author notes
Not sure were this came from just popped into my head....
A contest entry
- Anything and everything by Minstrel-Morose.
1200 points, ended June 28, 47 entries
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we all give in to the wine after a time i think, dead eyes liven up a bit when the wine flows. and love, well it boogies on down. a good poem.
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lol wine=poison in this case lol but I get what your saying thanks so much for the comment
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it's interesting. Sensually enticing. Very sexy. Short sweet and to the point and it seems very softly written at the same time. I like it
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Thank you for the comment
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this is really good... lots of emotion!!!
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Thanks
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