those words you never said
i know i could not stomach
and when you left me for dead
a ghost took my heart to drum it
though i had been buried
my body still yearned for you
my pregnant mind still carried
thoughts of lust that only grew
the day that lust was born
was a day i'll not forget
it was the day that i was torn
between the living and the dead
the living seem to have it all
but it's just a painted hell
where lovers choose to give themselves
and never live to tell
the dead deserve the envy
they have no hearts to tear to shreds
they exist without those feelings
and don't worry their pretty heads
well i guess it's time to choose
so eeny meeny miney mo
what have i got to lose?
just my feelings or my soul
couldn't sleep. this was born
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Again some nice poetic language and thoughts, reminds of your page when you say you went sky diving of your first date, must have been great, sitting enjoying reading your work,keep stepping
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hopefully ull coem out of this buffer than ever and still have emotions a soul and a dvr ;D!!
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Wow
I like the flow and the use of rhymes. Very good.
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I know, I don't know how saw you on here either, but I was mindlessly browsing the site because I had just worked a double waitressing shift and got home and couldn't sleep for some reason, so I was restless.
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Hey.. Thx for commenting on my 'poem'. Its rare anyone crosses my path. So thanks. This was really good. 'eeny meeny miney mo' is perfect and I can totally relate to the theme. Awesome.
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