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We Are Awake By Night

The days pass by with a certain laze,
And we spend the nights,
Away
in a haze.
No love, no anger,
emotions left
packed
well away
collecting dust
on the hanger.

Author notes

i love being a cliché

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • japscot
    June 2
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    I like it the way it is. =) Revise if you must

    • namesmeannothing
      June 5
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      haha thank you. i think that revision thing must've come up by default. i don't revise stuff, i just leave it terrible haha.