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Haiku ~ bathed




bathed by moonlight
the scent of jasmine
cocoons my soul




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  • Malabu
    June 3

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    yes I can smell the fragrance
    and ponder it essence
    completely encased by your words
    congrates on the Mention
    Mal


  • Cannonsfire
    June 2
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    Lovely scent in this haiku C