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My Place In The Sun

When all is bleak and dark
A prayer is answered
Beauty magically reemerges
Restoring hope and faith

From desolation and pain
Opportunity discovered
Spirits soar ever higher
Flowing, blooming, growing

Misfortune of placement
Or wicked hand's touch
Love cannot be denied
Filling hearts, illuminating

Fragile, yet ever determined
Despite impossible odds
And fierce obstacles laid
I will not be denied my place in the sun

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  • pinksnowboots
    June 3

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    Gosh I love the feeling of hope in this one!

    When all is bleak and dark
    A prayer is answered
    Beauty magically reemerges
    Restoring hope and faith


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    June 3
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    this is deeply meaningful... x


  • enlightenedatheist
    June 2

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    i feel your close is much sr=tronger than your opening but other than that I like the tone of this piece...a want for more. we all have that inside us.