I pray I make it through this second night,
I pray..when I awake,i'll be alright.
I pray You'll hold me through this night.and every single eerie night,
I pray You'll kiss my tears and free me from all my fears.
I pray..cause i'm not afraid
To let you know
How scared I am this night...
Help me make it through..
the night.
Author notes
Writing out my prayer as I lay down at 3am.
I'm not a poet.
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What a beautiful prayer!
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Thanks
Peace be unto you!
S.
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If scripture has meaning for you, there is a passage that says "God is not the author of fear; but a sound mind..." You can google to find and see the context. I am a bit rusty on any other details. Another I really like is "He is close to the broken hearted."
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I know,i'm human and I also have learnt and still learning that fear itself is the biggest problem.
There is a passage in The Old Testament Bible,which quotes not exactly in these words; "Fear ye not ME who has created a boundary so the sea breaks at the shore"
Another beautiful one is,"how dare you fear those who can kill the body and spirit,yet only I can kill the soul"
Thanks for your time!
S.
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This is really a beautiful prayer and I think what makes it so powerful is your wonderful use of epanaphora.
Love,
Amera♥
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Thank you
Im sorry,sumtimes new notes dont pop up on my screen.just saw this. Thankyou.
Epiphanithingmigig,Amera,lol what the heck is that.lol
You are so cool!
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LOL, It's the repetition of a word or words at the beginning of two or more successive verses, clauses, or sentences.
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Thanks sweety
Lol,you are not just one heck of a master poet.but you also exude an inner beauty that reveals so much about you!
Thankyou,you must be a lady and a half.
Ephiphanyera,lol.haha.
Luv S.
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It is a beautiful prayer my friend.
Putting your feelings onto paper is a wonderful way to express your thoughts and fears.
I also understand just how hard it is to do all of this via your mobile phone, because I have been there myself and know the difficulty.
I send you much love and happiness and keep up the great work with your writing!
your friend in poetry,
~Anne~
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Thanks Sweety
In a new home,new environment. I was shaky. Its getting better as each day passes.
Thank you Angel.
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i think this is a beautiful prayer. i can feel your heart in this and i think thats a big part in writing. keep on writing.
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Thanks
Thank you.
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gosh, this is simply beautiful
nicely done
thanks, it really moved me
T
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Thankyou
I was tossing and turning and that was my prayer and meditation during those hours,and I felt writing it down would help me.
Thanks for your commy.hope ure
Keeping well.tc and hugs.
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Such honest vulnerability is a rare thing. Its a gift a smart person would treasure. Hopefully they realize it.
Hopefully your prayer was answered!
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Yes it was
It was answered,
I awoke the next morning.
I dont believe in pretending or lieing.who would I be lieing to,but myself.
Yes some people try to take advantage of my sensitivity and vulnerability,and even see it as weakness...
It's not their fault,they simply don't understand....
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Your very welcome!
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This is so amazing
full of spirituality, fear yet not fear to ask for protection and shelter and an inner faith and positiveness that you will get it. the use of words and meanings are like a wonderful pearl strings with the gems shining beautifully adoring a being and spreading light of hope.
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Merci
Vous etes tres tres gentile.
Et aussi c'est vraie.
Merci encore cherie
Vous etes un tresor!
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