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Happy Anniversary

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Just because I love you and

Always thinking of you

I built this riding lawnmower

Especially just for you

♥ 

What better anniversary present

For you could I get

Maybe next year I’ll add

A ten speed aftermarket kit

 ♥

Now there is no reason

The lawn cannot be done

Between cooking and cleaning

Just thinking of you thunder bun

 ♥

I just know I will get lucky

I am counting on this night 

This year I remembered so

There shouldn’t be any fight  

 

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By ~ Maxboy
Background By ~ Little Eagle

Picture Prompt By ~ Unknown [Received in an email]

.....................................~hisaddiction robbed me~


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  • hisaddiction
    July 21
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    thank you or re-entering and following the rules lol. I really liked this one, the pic is nuts!

  • Ok yeah? lmao...I love it.


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 2
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy I could bring a laugh your way.



  • squirrelgirl
    June 30

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    The last stanza made me laugh,
    "This year I remembered so
    There shouldn’t be any fight"
    I don't know why...


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 30
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy I could bring a laugh your way.


  • misterfish
    June 28
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    Sounds like someone is gonna be in trouble...
    Great poem and a great laugh! Well done


    • Maxboy gold member
      July 5
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention, I am very happy you enjoyed my write and had a good laugh.



  • condor gold member
    June 14

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    Now this is what i call funny. Actaully, beret55 just sent me an email along the same lines as this an boy that was funny. This is a real doozy that had me crackin' up. The bike is a beauty. Excellent rhythm, flow, and rhyme, and that background...my favourite cartoon. Well done indeed. I wish you the very best in the contests.


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 14
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am glad I could bring a laugh your way sweetie.

      Thanks Girl

  • lol this was a really good poem. i liked it alot. very good and funny. keep up the awesome work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 13
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      Thank you very much for your great comment, I am happy I could bring a smile your way.


  • lmao, adorable for a good mower...loved the way you had created an easy way to say the grass needs mowed lol
    very good one
    thank you for this entry
    Linda


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 8
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      Thank you so much for the Honorable Mention and your wonderful comment, I am pleased you enjoyed my write.

      Thanks Linda


  • crowd
    June 8
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    nice job, thanks for entering


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 8
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      Thank you very much for the applause and great comment, I am happy you enjoyed my write.


  • My son wants one!! Now if you could get dog on that would be 2 jobs at once Superb! Much luck in the contest hun


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 6
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      Thank you so much sweetie, for your beautiful comments and support, I am working on an improved model for next year.



  • doolie gold member
    June 5

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    LOL!!! I'm sure glad we don't have any lawn to mow. Thunder Bun, now that could cause a fight. Very funny, sweetie...Best of luck in the contest.

    Luv Ya


    • Maxboy gold member
      June 5

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      Thank you very much sweetie, I am pleased you got a laugh out of my write and I am smart enough to never have said this about my honey.

      Luv Ya Too

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