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fear of love

It was in the shine
of his bright eyes.
Where once they laughed,
kissed and danced.
How love was shown
through hands and work.
Quite now he was showed his worth
through her.
If love does touch him in this life again?
Will he fear love, or love again on earth?

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A love of a life time, lost will he love again after 14 years?
I love my father.
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  • Keith Drew gold member
    June 3

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    I think the fear to love, is a fear of love lost.
    For always the pain of it to scar the heart so deep.

  • Hard to say, but like everyone time is the deciding factor.
    Great emotional write.
    Buddy

  • Very thoughtful and touching

    Love is a fickle customer you know, I hope that love or not he is happy


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 1
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    this is touching

    a bit sad, but the emotion was felt..