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my friend you see.

Ahh, my friend you come back to me.
Such a truth we both now see.
Such a lie you found in me.

Ahh, my friend you come back to me.
From the darkness of the thunder sea.
You lie down and surrender to me.

Ahh, my friend you come back to me.
Love suckers us in, you seem now to see.
You wish and beg for no other than me.

My friend, you are nothing more.
You will stand at the window and let the rain poor.
I was nothing then nothing but a cheap *bunny*.

My friend, you are nothing more.
You left flowers and chocolates at my door.
You left me cards saying its I that you adore.

Ahh, my friend you come back to see me.
My friend, you are nothing more.
Goodbye, I may miss you so but we have to let go.

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this is something i have been working on about my ex's yes all 3 of them

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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