I crave your stare; I even crave your touch
Never knew I could love someone so much
I dream of you, I dream of tomorrow
Where in your arms there could be no sorrow
Nothing is more beautiful than your eyes
They have a unique beauty: a sunrise
Where I get lost, and don’t want to be found
Where your voice echoes, an exquisite sound
I see your face; I even see your soul
That warm, gentle essence that makes you whole
I hear your heart; I hear that calming sound
Where my comfort and solace can be found
To hear you laugh, or even see you smile
Make the darkest days seem worthwhile
Though I feel empty when we are apart
I realise it’s because you own my heart
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This poem is amazing - it flows beautifully and kept me reading from beginning to end - well done! xx
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Gorgeous
One piece i can truly relate to beautifully penned you have truely shown what the heart feels when one is in love, this feeling most times is hard to explain or even express but you painted this picture of love so well here and i can only say well done because i loved every single bit of it.thanks for sharing this one.
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wow
Every time I read a stanza I thought to myself, "Make sure u point out how much you love that one!" ... but as I read on, I said that with every stanza! WoW!! This is a beautiful poem. I admire your ability to paint such a vivid and captivating emotion in this. I am jealous of the ability. Truly enjoyable poem. Nice work!!
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I am not usually for the sappy lovey dovey stuff, but for some reason I absolutly LOVE this!
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i loved this one. everything just went together so perfectly. very easy to read and flowed nice.
great job
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Awwwww
Somehow I just love happy poetry and it doesn't get much happier than this. This is wonderful, Sara, and you know how I feel about you and how I wish you all the happiness in the world. Sounds like you're getting there. And, nice work on the poetry too. Fun to write poetry about something we really love. Love you MORE of course. Keep going.
Dad
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