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Peteskid's brush










He paints the sky in unique colors
with soft verses and melodic lines
touching the moon with his fingers
he paints the sky in unique colors

In splendid summers or winters
his poetry star always shines

He paints the sky in unique colors
with soft verses and melodic lines








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To Howard, who paints the most beautiful sights with his words

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    July 8

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    excellent~

    This read so smooth calming and peaceful
    Love how you repeated the lines...
    Just perfect sis
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Rose Angel gold member
    June 27

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    HOODWINKED!

    My dear, I do agree with you on Howard, and I adore your triolet here...I believe it is the first I have read...He deserves the tribute, and I am so glad I have read...and will read more!


  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 25

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    Hood-Winked!

    This is a lovely dedication - I love the softness and care of the words, and the rhyme is stunning I think that you are very talented with rhyme - and I'm glad that you were chosen to be Hood-Winked!


    Polly


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    June 25

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    Hood-Wink!

    One of the nicest dedications I have had the pleasure of reading here on AP

    I really like how this ended with the first two lines - beautiful

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • leo2
    June 16

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    I've run across his work on here from time to time and think your tribute fits him to a tee.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

  • arnal
    June 11

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    Very nice, I've added peteskid to my favorites because I like his work also, I'm enjoying running through your poetry.


  • Desire gold member
    June 6

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    This is Precious!!!

    This is a Beauty!! Soft flow and so Gentle-Loving I can't help but smile Sweet Friend!
    Your words swell the eyes~ Soothes the Heart
    and how Blessed You are also him to have each other this Lifetime~ Wonderful Friendship
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 4

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    Ah, the sky, the sky!
    I can remember deep, dark, lush descriptions
    of PK's skies. Perfect, Mari!

    M-C


  • Kumori Kasei
    June 4
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    Soft-spoken and very beautiful!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    June 1

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    Mari this is so beautiful and well done. You have captured the beauty of his writing and his spirit here in your own tender words. Just perfect.


  • Yemassee gold member
    June 1

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    It's a lovely triolet. written by an excellent poet to a fellow excellent poet. Both writer's who understand the beauty of the sky, and words.


  • estbelle gold member
    June 1

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    'touching the moon with his fingers'

    This is a beautiful triolet Mari
    I remember you writing one for me
    indeed, he does.
    I read some of his works


  • Peteskid gold member
    June 1

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    Mari-
    thank you for this lovely Triolet, you have a style with this form that I think is unique...such wonderful expression; and I think your days of not writing are over...this is a beautiful poem, one that I will cherish; and i think I will keep trying to paint the sky, it is a source of wonder and true inspiration..thank you...h

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