word wounds
nest
in dead emotions.
maggots rest
in flesh
torn inside out.
Author notes
my gut feeling is that this is not finished. what do you think?
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I know this needs more work, thanks for any contructive criticism
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perfect to me the truth .
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Perfect for a few words contest.
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TRUTH BE TOLD
This my friend is the truth, you describe so well what words can do and make you feel. Wise words of wisdom you shown here. Well done. peace be with you.
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I'll take the word wounds any time.
Enjoyed your write.
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this is very descriptive. The imagery is great and it packs a punch with very few words. Thank you for entering.
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