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In The Dark

I'm exploding
From they way you look at me
It says hold me
Love me
Never let me go

But the words that fall from you lips
They say "you can't
I won't let you in
You broke my heart
That won't happen again"

You still don't trust me
And I can't say I blame you
But just for one second, forget
The way I disapeared
How I left you all alone

All I want to do
All my heart really needs
Is to hold you
Love you
See you smile in the dark

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  • OMG!!!!!!!!!

    Do you know how this made me feel when I read this, I wanted to cry for real... I had to read it like 4 times... There are times when I feel like this about someone, but I don't know anything to say really... I mean, I have been getting hurt, but I really want to be happy again... IDK WAT TO DO!!!!!!!!!!
    ~Alix Maria