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Blaze across the sky

There’s this feeling of where ya gonna go?
I can't help but feel I’m on the lonely road
Like a shooting star
I blaze across the sky
Two lovers under me
One day they're gonna die

She's a soldier
She keeps moven on
Like a fairytale
Each smile keeps her strong
On a lonely day she looks in the mirror
She cuts of all her hair
So the world can see her fears

He’s her everything
But his truths are all lies
Her name is carved
Secretly he wants to die
Her momma says he's a piece of shit
But to her he's everything
He’s her prince

There’s this feeling of where ya gonna go?
I can't help but feel I'm on the lonely road
Like a shooting star
I blaze across the sky
Two lovers under me
One day they're gonna die

Author notes

Hmmm I found myself to school a half hour early, realized that I had not a face I recongnized even when the campus was full... I wrote this on a red bench... I like this bench now

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