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Could you steal my innocense?

Hush child let your diamond ice just roll away,
Spiral down your rosy cheeks,
And drop into enternity,
Because my child the fairies here.

They'll come together,
All as one into our medow,
Their silver gowns saddle enough,
Upon the Eagle's golden shine.

The sapphire sun,
The crystal waters,
They will come together,
In Earth's Holy Matranomy.

Because my child the fairies here,
And all your fears,
Are cast away,
Because my child the fairies here.

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eagle, sapphire, crystle, medow, fairies

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 18
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    This is pretty good thank you for entering. Good luck

  • Treasure 5 gold member
    June 18

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    Wonderful I really like the words you picked from the word bank. Thank you for entering this contest and good luck.