Oh God
my storm for the intimacy is never winding up
and this cosmos is indelicate to bequeath me such cease-fire
I caress your figure on the wall
questioning myself where should I lure your consciousness
and how could I assimilate the calm of love?
And while echoing me
you bestow the words by sonja
through her universal poetry
Oh God...
Author notes
I am a fan of the Sonja's Poetry...It is a tribute dedicated to her
http://allpoetry.com/Sonja
In a list
A contest entry
- Homage by Tarja.
700 points, ended June 19, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A most gracious homage indeed sir, well done.
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how smooth and how delicate
like a butterfly tasting, coolwhip for the first time.
my brother and I have been bonding for the first time ever in our life. seems he is over ever-other day and I am over twice per week if not more often. we have been stoken the fire of love and family hood cause we are all that is left. But I am so enjoying it.
thanks for thinking of me.
*hugs*
I will be back ASAP
Tamara
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Hey sis, I love your poetry
when tou always sent me those book of your work to read. it is in your lanauge. I cannot read it. lolssss Need it in english, or sent me you book on how to speak. I think I like that to learn your words you speak. My birthday is coming up. july 6 and I will be 61 no i mean i can turn it around now right> So I will be Sweet 16 yeaaaaaaa
Love you kiddo.
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Hi dear friend,
This is a very nice tribute. She's a wonderful friend.
Wish you the best.
Shahrzad
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Very Kind...
And a Beautiful Tribute!!
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LOVE IT
The true depths of your words are incredible. Your poem is truely beautiful and very special... I loved each and every word... and the feel of the poem is amazing...
I am sure Sonja is truely honoured and deepley touched by such a very special tribute to her...
She really is an angel and an incredible friend
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A very nice tribute to Sonja, one of my favourite poets here on AP and such a beautiful woman!! Well done!
~ Nicolette
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Lovely.
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This is so beautiful! this poem really captures the peaceful and lovely essence of sonja as a person and as a poet. very well penned!
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SO LOVELY!!!!!!!!
It is a truly wonderful feeling when you know you are appreciated by others. I know in reading your poetry I have been rewarded in many ways.
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Sonja is truly a fine poetess, a fine lady. Your poem for her speaks louder than just the printed word. It speaks of love, friendship, respect and appreciation of her work
It's a beautiful piece
Dee
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what an incredible piece of work! There is this erotic undertone and just illuminates your passion so well, it makes the piece so exciteing! I am so excited when reading this! GREAT JOB!
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prayfully penned, as always. What a beautiful tribute!
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A truly lovely dedication to a wonderful poetess. So pleased to have read this today. ~Pamela
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Thuis was great
I love the way you put those words. Great flow.
Leaving in two days for alaska. come home on the 14th of june. then my birthday will be on the 6th of july. I will be 61 yrs olds, Im not old. look i will ve 16 instead. love tou aia
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I read it over and over again such beauty and that is the Queen Sonja
True universal poetry and a non- drying well of honey sweetening our life Sonja she is a Queen indeed
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lovely
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Beautiful tribute...
To a beautiful spirit!
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This is wonderful. What a tribute. Fantastic writing here. I am sure Sonja is very very proud and happy with this, also honoured too, no doubt. Well done indeed.
Wayne Leon
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My dear friend, I know that you like my poetry but with this so nice dedication to me and my work you really surprised me. Thank you very much.
~Sonja~
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You are welcome.. you deserve this tribute.
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Thank you for introducing us to Sonja as a person and a poem dedicated to her....As I read her page, I realize she offers peace and love in her words...A breath of fresh air and a fragrance that we could all have as well...Thank you for this write, friend...
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What a lovely dedication. Peace, Rhonda
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